English 109.01
Johnson Park Middle School/
OSU Literacy Partnership

Mindy Wright

wright.7@osu.edu
292-8134
218 Ohio Stadium East
For directions, go to http://english.osu.edu/programs/writing_workshop/directionstoworkshop.html

Office Hours By Appointment
See my calendar at http://www.icalx.com/html/wright7/day.php?cal=OSU Schedule

Schedule

 

Date Class Activity What's Due at the Beginning of Class
Journals are green
Essays are blue
Week 1
9/21
First-Day Essay Journal 1: F-D Essays
9/22

Introductions
Begin work with e-portfolios
What kinds of digital media are you familiar with?

 
9/23

Discuss Writing Project #1
Begin reading Tutoring Adolescent Literacy Learners--Chapter 1

 

Week 2
9/26

Begin generating criteria for Writing Project #1
Discuss Rocket Boys
in groups (Chapters 1-9)

Journal 2: Response to reading
9/27

Visit from Dr. Kay Halasek, Writing Center Director
Respond to writing--in class

Bring to class an electonic version of your start on WP#. Bring it on a flash drive or e-mail it to yourself so you can access it in class.
9/28

Exchange and respond to WP#1D#1
Respond to writing online--outside of class

WP#1 Draft 1 due
9/29

Research JPMS
What more do we want to know?

Journal 3: What was your middle school like?
9/30

Discuss Tutoring Adol. Chapters 2-4

Journal 4: Response to reading
Week 3
10/3

Discuss Rocket Boys (Chapters 10-20)

Journal 5: Response to reading
10/4

Begin generating criteria for magazine
What is good writing for a magazine?

Divide into editorial groups

 
Journal 6: Magazine criteria
10/5

Exchange and respond to WP#1 Draft #2
How have criteria changed?

WP #1 Draft 2 due
10/6
Discuss RB/Prepare for Hickam visit
What might you get out of hearing Hickam speak this evening?
What questions do you have for him?
Review e-portfolio for Writing Center tutors
WP#1D2 questions
 
How to ask for feedback

Review schedule changes/Take stock

 

10/6
7:30 pm
Mershon Auditorium

Homer Hickam Visit

What made you write about rocket boys?
Did you save any of the rockets?
Where did he meet his wife?
What does she think about his career?
Does she like to write?
If you have kids, did they turn out like him?
When is the last time you went to Coalwood? What is like now?
What is your relationship with your brother like?
Was NASA what you expected it to be?
Did you keep in contact with your friends?
Was it cool talking to the President?

Do you regret not dating Dorothy?
Would you consider this one of your better books?
Is there anything you wanted to do that you haven't gotten to yet?

 
10/7 Homer Hickam Visit (Exchange evening talk with 10:30 class time) Send draft of WP #1 to WC Tutor via e-portfolio by Monday, 10/10
Week 4
10/10
Discuss RB (Chapters 21-Epilogue)
De-brief Hickam visit
Return WP#1D2/In-class conferences


Journal 7: Response to reading

Journal 8: Response to Hickam visit

If you cannot attend Hickam's talk, for this journal, research Hickam's life outside RB. Begin with questions you'd like to answer, and then find where you can get that information.

10/11


Begin to collect public online texts
1) Personal Blogs
http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/?q=blog/15

2) Course Blogs
http://instructors.cwrl.utexas.edu/bacon/

3) Exchange via e-portfolio

4) Midlink Magazine

Analysis:
Who are the participants?
What is the purpose?
What are the advantages of this format/media?
What are the disadvantages?

Continue in-class conferences

 
10/12

Continue to discuss RB --connection with JPMS?
Review magazine descriptions

 
10/13

Discuss Video Games

Journal 9: Response to reading
10/14

Discuss topic for Writing Project #2 -Online text analysis

 
Week 5
10/17
1) Prepare for JPMS Visit
2) Exchange WP#1.
Proofread.
 
One strength, one piece of advice if the writer were going to revise once more.

Final draft WP #1 due

Journal 10: What do you think will be important for how you work with JPMS students? What questions do you have about how to work with middle school age students?
10/18

Visit from JPMS Students

Magazine Materials

 
10/19 Discuss online analysis Journal 11: Response to JPMS visit
Journal 12: By end of class turn in plan for WP#2
10/20

In-class conferences

Work on online analysis

 
10/21 Exchange and respond to WP#2 D1

WP#2 Draft 1 due

Week 6
10/24
In-class conferences WP#2 D1  
10/25

Plans for JPMS Exchanges

Continue in-class conferences

Journal 13: In-class--What help can you offer your JPMS literacy partner online as he or she begins to create M! a Magazine for and about East Side Middle Schools? What are your particular strengths as a writer and as a collaborator?
10/26


Workshop WP#2
Groups based on common sites exchange ideas

Journal 14: In class--Group reports on similar sites
10/27

Discuss ideas from Journal 13's
Workshop WP#2 /Review how to send WC tutor via e-portfolio

 
10/28

Generate new questions for WP#2 criteria
Turn in WP#2D2

WP #2 Draft 2 due

Week 7
10/31

In-class conferences WP #2 D2
Exchange and respond to WP#2 D2

Send draft of WP #2 to WC Tutor via e-portfolio by end of day

Journal 15: How can you define "digital media"? By looking at the three sites in your WP#2, what can you say about key characteristics of "digital media"?

11/1
Group analysis of:
Paper Disptach
Front page of dispatch.com
Suscriber page of disptach.com
Electronic edition of Dispatch

Analysis Questions:
What does it look like?
How does it work?
What is its purpose?
Who is it for?
What is its context?


Continue in-class conferences

Journal 16: Description of your group's version of the Dispatch

11/2

Continue in-class conferences

Journal 17: JPMS Responses
11/3
7th week evaluation
What have we done?
W
hat do we need to do?
Journal 18: Evaluation
11/4 Exchange and respond to WP#2 D3

WP #2 Draft 3 due

Week 8
11/7
In-class conferences WP#2 D3
Connections Workshop
 
 
List as many connections as you can think of in your WP #2.
 
What categories do they fall into: connection through audience, connection through form, connection through message, connection through effect?
 
What ones or one works best for you?
 
What seems most convincing?
 
To focus on that connection what will you need to do in your final draft?
Begin to identify information that comes from other sources
Journal 19: In-class Connections Workshop
11/8
Citation Workshop
Bring to class a list of the sources and publication information you used in your research for WP #2

1) Highlight places in your paper that refer to a "source": web sites, cds, games, ,etc.
2) For each source place you've highlighted, what is the best method of letting readers know your "credibility"? In the text itself, in parentheses, in a list at the end of the paper?

Author
"Title" (of article, chapter. . .)
Title (of book, journal, etc.)
Publisher
Place
Date

Style Manuals

 
11/9

Discuss topic for Writing Project #3--guide for next quarter
Divide into writing groups
Workshop WP#3--Develop plans

 
11/10
Workshop WP#3
E-Mail: If you are going to e-mail someone for information, what do you need to include in that e-mail?
 
What do you want to know?
 
What will your reader need to know from you to answer your question?
 
Interview: What questions do you want to ask?
 
In what situation will you ask them?
 
Visits: When will you make the visit?
 
Who do you need to talk to to arrange the visit?
 
What do you expect to see?
 
Internet research: What do you want to find out?
 
Where will you find it?

Workshop WP #2
 
11/11 No Class Veterans' Day  
Week 9
11/14
Discuss final draft WP#2
Trademark errors

Workshop WP #3
Newsletter Groups:
Background to Project (Winter 2005-September 2005): Peco, Ashley, Jeremy, Angel
October 18: Albany, Sonia, Eric, Billy
 
M and the JPMS newsletter staff: Nick, Adam, Mike Logan
 
JPMS background: Donald, Sasha, Tiera, Nigel

 

11/15


Workshop WP #3
How will this assignment be valued?
What criteria should be used for writing/revising/grading?
What is involved in accomplishing your group's article(s)?
What jobs/contributions are you expecting each member of your group to do?
How should each of those contributions be valued?

Final Draft WP #2 due  
Journal 20: Plan for grading
11/16

Second communication with JPMS
What is your literacy partner asking you to do?
What set of guidelines or checklists can we give them for preparing a newsletter article?

Journal 21: Response to JPMS exchange
11/17

Workshop WP #3

 
11/18
Discussion:
What have we learned about good writing in a digital context?
What have we learned about good writing in college courses?
What have we learned about good writing in middle school?
Journal 22: Your response to discussion questions
Week 10
11/21

Workshop WP#3

Newsletter Criteria
1) Focus. Does the article have a clear focus? (Is the "point" clearly stated? Does the headline help readers see what the focus of the article is?
2) Development. Has the writer included good description and facts? 
3) Research. Has the writer done appropriate/enough research on the topic? Has the writer collected information?
4) Audience. Has the writer included other people's points of view: students, teachers, principal, planners, etc.
5) Appearance. Has the writer used colors, fonts, pictures to create pizzazz and to emphasize importance?

Send draft of WP #3 to WC Tutor via e-portfolio

11/22

Workshop WP#3

 
11/23

No Class

 
11/24-11/25 No Class Thanksgiving Holiday  
Week 11
11/28

Discuss final exam topic

Journal 23: in -class draft final exam
11/29 Workshop WP#3 and final exam
Last communication with JPMS
 
11/30 Workshop WP#3 and final exam  
12/1 In-class conferences on final exam drafts Draft of final exams due
12/2

Presentation of WP #3
E-mail final version to wright.7@osu.edu before class
Course Evaluations

 

Final Week
Thursday, December 8

7:30-9:18 am

Final Exam