Questions
for Draft 2 of WP#1
1)
What is the literacy/learning experience the writer focuses on?
2) Does the writer explain/describe the experience in detail?
3) Why is the experience important to the writer? (Does the writer analyze?)
Does the writer tell the story that happened in his or her head?
4) Is the organization clear consistent?
5) What is one strength you see in the essay?
6) What is one thing you think the writer could do to improve the essay?
7) Do you see any patterns in “surface errors?”
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